Start with your Thesis Statement -
This will appear at the beginning of an introductory paragraph of your paper - it offers concise summary of the main point -
What is concise - ? exact, clear -
Thesis Statement - focuses your ideas into one or two sentences -
it will present the topic and if applicable/your opinion or argument.
Your Superhero Thesis Statement will have three superhero self-claimed powers. Write about your Superhero (you) in third person.
For example; Water Woman is a superhero with superpowers that include making a water bubble, tsunami and, has the ability to freeze water.
Thesis statement in the introductory paragraph -
In this introductory paragraph lets the reader know what they are going to read about -
Body Paragraphs - 3 total describing each power
1st sentence is a topic sentence - followed by 4 supporting sentences -
Water Bubbles Power -
Tsunami Power
Water Freezing Power
Concluding Paragraph - Conclusion - Rephrases and the Wrap Up -
Restating highlights -
Concluding paragraph is the last paragraph in an academic essay and generally summarizes the essay, presents the main idea of the essay, or gives an overall solution to a problem or argument given in the essay.
The Cover - YOUR SUPERHERO - must be made out of geometric shapes - it will need to be labeled - you must label all shapes you use and be color coded to match - for example -
all types triangles are yellow - circles are blue - be specific with your triangles -rectangles in hair, etc.
Superhero on a Poster Board - soft for posting up on wall - refer to geometric poster on board. Create a key that represents your shape/color - for example - draw a yellow triangle - label it triangle - then use (any size) triangle - all yellow
Due Dates; Outlines are due Thursday, March 30th - Post your plan by Thursday, March 30th to include your Superhero Title Name/Your Name and your Outline - both due on Thursday, Print copy and posted online
Final Poster Board - Superhero Postings, on the blog - by Thursday, April 6th - Be prepared to share in class - Posters are also due by Thursday, April 6th -
Outline
ReplyDeleteBy: Daniela D
Thesis statement: Binky Boy can fly ,has a laser binky and has an indestructible onesie. Hook: Have you ever seen a baby talk well this one can fly.
Binky Boy's real name is Larry Roberts .
His binky and onesie are great tools .
Binky Boy has had powers since he was born .
Binky Boy has a laser as his binky , can fly and also has an indestructible onesie.
My title is Super Baby
DeleteRees G.
ReplyDeleteDid you know Super-Dude has lasers, super acceleration, and claws.
Super-Dude has deadly lasers.
Super-Dude is very fast and he has super acceleration.
Super-Dude and deadly and sharp claws.
OUTLINE
ReplyDeleteShaylee
Catch Phrase :"I got my mind on you"
Introductory: Have you ever wondered how a superhero with mind powers would be like?
Thesis: Psychic Girl can fly to spy on enemies, read minds to see what the bad guys know, telechonieses to stop bad guys from getting away, and explodes things with her mind to blow things up to freak out the bad guys.
Topic sentence: Psychic Girl's real name is Sarah Sundune.
Topic sentence: According to wallaby city news this superhero's name is Psychic Girl.
Topic sentence: According to wallaby city news Psychic Girl has just saved 19 people from a burning building.
Concluding: Psychic Girl has not been able to save wallaby city lately because of the new villain in town.
Out line:
ReplyDeleteHook-Have you ever heard of Gummy Girl?
Thesis statement-Gummy Girl fires exploding gummy bears, and sticky gummy juice out of her hands, she also can teleport.
(1) Topic sentence-Gummy Girl lives in new gum city.
(2) Topic sentence-Gummy Girl's real name is Sarah Stienheart.
(3) Topic sentence-She has amazing powers.
(4) Conclusion-(wrap up)
-Niffer D.
Nice outline
DeleteCody- Thesis statement- have you seen something lately in the dark well maybe its the man in dark.
ReplyDeleteHave you seen something lately in the dark well maybe its the man in dark.
The man in dark can fly, go invisible and is really strong like batman
According to death vale the man in dark has stopped 50 villains.
According to the vale of doom saved 20 people last fall
The man in dark is very busy is bye now
Introduction -Angle light is a super hero that protects the city of San Francisco. Her real name is Destiny East .Her occupation is a Psychiatrist . She has the ability to shoot light out of her light . She also has the ability to be invisible. She also has the ability to move things with her mind.
ReplyDeleteTopic sentence1< Angel Light has the ability to shoot light out of her hands , she uses this ability to blind her enemies for a few minutes.
Topic sentence2 < Angel light has the ability to turn invisible she uses her ability to sneak up on her enemies.
Topic sentence 3< Angel light has the ability to move things with mind she uses on her enemies to knock things in there way .
Conclusion >Angel Light lives in San Francisco . Has the abilities to shoot light out of her hands , be invisible,and move things with her mind. She is a Psychiatrist. Her real name is Destiny East.
Outline
ReplyDeleteThesis statement- Aspen Air is a superhero who can control the wealthier, land, and ocean.
Paragraph 1- How she controls the weather.
Paragraph 2- How she controls the land.
Paragraph 3- How she controls the ocean.
Concluding Paragraph- How all of these powers help her fight crimes and safe the city.
- Isabelle Tobish
Outline by:Alivia B
ReplyDeleteHook: Have you seen the new superhero in Stackler City?
Thesis: Her name is Whrill Wind and her powers include speed,stealthiness,and gym skills. She is very clumsy to , but most 13 year olds are clumsy.
P1 Topic Sentence : She can run faster than light.
P2 Topic Sentence : If she falls she uses her gym skills to make it look like it was suppose to happen.
P3 Topic Sentence : When she is bored she'll hide on roofs of tall and gloomy buildings to watch the town or funny dog videos.
Concluding : Thanks to Whrill Wind the superhero with speed, stealfiness , and gym skills, Stackler City is safe.
Intro paragraph: Have you heard of Speed Devil(Edward Ford)? He has the speed force. He also has max human ability. Speed devil also is a very skilled ninjas.
ReplyDeleteParagraph 2: When Edward was 16 he was struck by lightning, which changed his life.
Paragraph 3: Edward has always been strong, tall and fast since he was a acrobat.
Paragraph 4: After Speed Devil gained his powers he was taken in by Ninja warrior Shang-Chi.
Conclusion paragraph: Speed Devil is one of the greatest heroes of all.
His new name is Rollan Ford.
DeleteFashionista
ReplyDeleteThesis- Fashionista is the most beautiful super hero alive and when she fights of bad guys she looks stylish doing it.
Topic sentence- According to Moorland city news she is one of the best super hero's.
Topic sentence- Fashionista has many super powers.
Topic sentence- She also has many different weapons.
Conclusion- Fashionista is an amazing superhero.
Hereally is my outline for the project.
ReplyDeleteOpening paragraph.
Tells the beginning of the story
Thesis statement
Paragraph 1
Power to read minds
Paragraph 2
power to read the future
Paragraph 3
Telekinesis
Conclusion paragraph
Raps everything up
My story is about Wonder. She can see into the future,read minds,also Telekinesis. For more you will have to wait on my essay
Earthy girl by Kaisha H.
ReplyDeleteI. With her powers Earthy Girl tries to make the world a better place by.
A. Creating earthquakes
B. Growing plants
C. Controlling the weather
II. Whenever Earthy Girl does the splits, it is to make earthquakes
A. Catching bad guys by them falling into the earth when it quakes
B. It separates villains from the good people
C. Helps create waves at the beach for kids to play in
III. Be careful when Earthy Girl throws out her hands, you know she is going to make plants
A. Make the earth a better place
B. The vines grow to capture the bad guys by wrapping them up
C. Helps feed people, especially the homeless
IV. Watch out! When Earthy Girl starts clapping 5-10 times it means she is getting ready to change the weather
A. Makes lightning and thunder storms to distract the villains
B. Makes Tornadoes to swirl up and capture the bad guys
C. Makes it sunny on a gloomy day to make people happy
V. Earthy Girl loves saving the day and helping people all over the world.
A. Earthquakes make villains fall into the ground and create waves for the kids to play in
B. Growing plants helps feed the poor and wrapping the villains up in the vines grown
C. Controlling the weather to get rid of the bad guys by her crazy tornadoes and making the sun shine when people are down
D. Each power has a way to capture the villains and make people happy.
Intro paragraph- Have you ever seen Jesus Freak (Espen Summers)? Espen has the power to heal the sick. Also he has a personal relationship with Christ. He can finds the lost so the Lord can save them.
ReplyDeleteParagraph 2- When Espen was 8 he gave his life to Christ Jesus.
Paragraph 3- Espen relized that being a christian means more than just going to church, but worshiping Him and having personal relationship with Christ.
Paragraph 4- Espen saw a man by God's temple who couldn't walk. Espen healed him with the power of the Holy Spirit.
Conclusion paragraph- Espen summers loves the Lord with all his heart. He lives for God. He serves the Lord no matter what the Devil throws in his path.
-Breezy
Dolores
ReplyDeleteby:Eliabeth. J
Dolores doesn’t have any super powers. She as weapons and combat skills. She will try to do anything to help her family and other survivors. She will attack bandits and anything that stands in between her and her family from getting rescue.
Dolores was just a regular house wife but a nuclear bomb landed in her town. She ran around her house to grab soup, water, her family, and other items. She had 60 seconds to grab the items and her family and put them in the shelter.
Dolores fights off bandits with an axe and a rifle. She also uses a padlock to keep bandits out of the shelter. She will do anything for survival. She can repair items with the boy scout handbook. She will go out to the waste land to look for supplies.
Dolores will try to help other survivors in any way she can. She even helped people with a mutation they had extra arms! She helped survivors for a nearby town of Hill Valley and the survivors were led by twins a brother and a sister. Soon either the military or the twins will rescue her and her family.
In the shelter, Dolores, will split the food and water. She will also kill rodents that will harm her food, supplies, or her family. She will try to keep her family sane and try to make them stay in the shelter.
Over all Dolores is a hero of the waste land. She kind hearted person with an iron fist. Life may have been hard but Dolores pushes through. Each of her battle wound represents a memory.
Earthy Girl
ReplyDeleteBy: Kaisha H.
With her super powers Earthy Girl tries to make the world a better place. She is able, to create earthquakes to catch the villains, which is her favorite power. Earthy Girl loves growing plants to make the world a prettier place. Controlling the weather is also one of her other powers. Even though these powers can destroy the Earth, Earthy Girl has the power to change it back to normal.
Whenever Earthy Girl does the splits, it’s to make super ultra earthquakes. She is, able to catch the deadly bad guys by them falling into the earth when she makes it quake. She separates Villain Town from the Good People Town by doing a perfect split. When she makes little earthquakes, its helps create safe and fun waves at the beach for kids to play in. This part of her super power makes everyone happy.
Be extra careful when Earthy Girl throws out her magical hands, you know she is going to make amazing plants! She helps make the earth a better place by growing beautiful plants. This power also makes long and thorny vines grow so she can capture the evil bad guys by wrapping them up. Earthy Girl helps feed people, especially the homeless, by creating all these edible plants. The colorful plants she creates make the Earth so much prettier.
Watch out! When Earthy Girl starts clapping her hands 5-10 times it means she is getting ready to change the weather. She is able to make bright lightning and loud thunder storms to distract the villains. Once she distracts the villains with the crazy windy storms she then starts to make tornadoes to swirl up and capture them. She can also make it sunny on a gloomy day to make people happy. Everyone looks forward to seeing glittery rainbows after a stormy day of capturing villains.
Earthy Girl loves saving the day and helping people all over the world. Earthquakes make villains fall into the ground and create waves for the kids to play in. Growing tasty plants helps feed the poor and, also wrapping the villains up in the deadly vines grown so they can’t escape. She loves controlling the weather to get rid of the bad guys by her crazy tornadoes and making the sun shine brightly when people are down. Each helpful power of Earthy Girl has a way to capture the villains and make people happy.
I like how when she does the splits it makes an earth quak to catch villians. But her instead of her creating little waves, how about she makes more land?
DeleteHay kittens its kk, I loved your poster, it was so cute and earthy. I loved how you also included lots of info on your superhero's powers. I think you should tell more about her back round in your story too. Your story was really good kittens.
DeleteFashionista
ReplyDeleteby Bryndal W
Fashionista is the most beautiful super hero alive. When she fights off bad guys, she looks stylish doing it. According to Morland City News, she is one of the best super heroes ever! She can catch any bad guy in Morland City. She is so beautiful and stylish that they call her Fashionista. She has beautiful thick brown hair and she has long eyelashes that are absolutely gorgeous.
Fashionista has unique super powers. She can taze people with her lipstick tazer gun when they are least expecting it. She can poke people with her long thick eyelashes. She can also glue people to walls with her super sticky eyelash glue.
Fashionista has an eye liner jet that she flies around on. Her makeup pallet can hypnotize people before they even know it. There are so many things that she can do.
Fashionista is an amazing super hero with some amazing and unique super powers. She is the best super hero Morland City has ever had. There has never been a bad guy that could defeat her. Fashionista loves being stylish and beautiful as she protects the city from harms way.
Great job!!!!! I love how you described your super hero's appearance. I also like the name fashionista. Maybe next time you could tell us how she got her superpowers. -Delani
DeleteJesus Freak
ReplyDeleteBy: Briann G.
Have you ever heard of Jesus Freak (Espn Summers)? He has the power to heal the sick. He has the power to heal the blind. He has a personal relationship with Christ.
When Espn gave his life to Christ he was at his church. He was 8 years old and heard the pastor talk about that God calls us to make disciples through all nations. Espn realized that he’s lost, he needs the Lord, he needs Jesus Christ in his heart. Espn’s life changed forever.
One day, Espn realized that being a Christian is more then just going to church. It’s to talk to God and have a personal relationship with Him. Espn went to Israel to share the Gospel.
In Israel Espn saw a blind man sitting on steps to a temple. Espn went up to the man and said, “ In the name of Jesus Christ open your eyes and see.” The man gave his life to Christ after Espn healed him.
Espn got stoned and died in Israel for sharing the Gospel. That is not the end of Espn Summers life. Espn went to heaven and lived for eternity with God and Jesus. He will live forever in heaven.
I really like how you said the Espn went to Heaven and that he will live forever.I also liked how you put truth into your story like how God calls us to make disciples through all nations. I think you could make your story more interesting by adding another mission trip in Espn's life.
DeleteDeep Thoughts
ReplyDeleteBy Kassia S.
This is the story of Wonder. She is a superhero with telekinesis ,mind reading powers ,and finally predicts the future. In this parts of the story I will send you off with knowing this. She is amazing at kicking butt. But next you will learn and read about her powers.
Wonders telekinesis was only known by her parents. Her telekinesis lets her move things with a slight thought. She also can lift bad guys into the air. After she does this she can destroy their inventions. That is all we know about Wonders amazing telekinesis power.
This next part is about Wonders power to read minds. She can read minds by just thinking about it. She doesn't have to do anything except read their thoughts and kick their butts obviously. Again only her parents knew about all her powers. Wonder uses her mind reading powers to read a villain's mind before they're about to attack the city.
The lost power is Wonders amazing ability to predict the future. This power allows her to fight bad guys even before they're about to hurt the city. Her power allows her to see days, weeks or even years into the future. Wonders power to read into the future is not taken lightly she doesn't use it for bad and she doesn't use it on her friends. Wonder is amazing with her powers she mostly uses her ability to read the future. So don't get stuck between Wonder and the City.
In conclusion, Wonder is a superhero that protects the city with her three powers. And her powers are telekinesis, read minds and finally seeing into the future. If Wonder was real I would give her a big hug for what she does. Wonder protect the city with all her strength with her lasso of strength, a staff that shoots lasers, also a bullet proof shield. So I hope that you don't think about risking your life to save a city that's for the superheroes. But superheroes protect us all and one day I hope to be one too.
Hi KK its Jenna. I like how you put a lot of thought into this project. You added detail, I just love your story.But I did notice that in the fourth paragraph you meant to say last but you said lost. I also saw that in paragraph four you put "to read into the future", that real did not make sense to me so maybe next time you could put something like "see into the future."
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Super-Dude
ReplyDeleteBy Rees G.
Did you know Super-Dude has lasers? He also has super speed and has a really awesome personal life. Super-Dude’s real name is Raymone James (AKA LeBron James). He was a track, basketball, football, and baseball star in high school and he is still doing it then he pursued his superhero dreams. Super-Dude is the best super hero ever.
Super-Dude has orange and blue lasers. According to Metro City News, he almost killed Maximus with his lasers, but then Maximus got a diamond body. The lasers will either paralyze you or kill you. Super-Dude’s lasers can shoot up to a mile until it hits who it needs to.
Super-Dude is one of the fastest super heroes to ever live. According to Metro City Channel 5, Super-Dude escaped pretty much death by running away from a bomb. That is why he is a track star and a marathon star. His speed is very helpful because he is still running to safety.
Super-Dude has an amazing normal life. Super-Dude also has his own charity. He has enough energy to run a marathon, then play in his basketball games and scored 50 points, went to his football game and did awesome, finally pitch a no-hitter in his baseball game. He lives on an island a bit off of the coast of Metro City, called Super Metro Island. He has an unnecessary, humongous mansion that has everything you can think of in it, an airport, a mall, an aquarium.
Now you know who Super-Dude is. Do you think he is the best hero ever? I certainly think he is the best super hero in the history of heroes. I believe his powers are awesome. If you could have one of Super-Dude’s powers which one would it be?
Hi Rees this is Israel. In your story your guys A.K.A name could be different because the name you have is kind of taken... by LeBron James.
DeleteHi Rees, its Shaylee. I like your superheros name. But the lazes are a bit intense do you think. I mean they can paralyze or KILL YOU!!!!!
DeleteWhrill Wind
ReplyDeleteBy: Alivia B
Have you seen the new superhero in Stackler City?
Her name is Whrill Whind and her powers include speed, stealthiness, and gymnastic skills. She is very clumsy, but most thirteen year olds are. Stackler City is filled with crime and has never had a superhero to save the city. Whrill Wind wasn't always a superhero. She was a normal teen, until someone shot her. The only way to save her was to give her superhuman abilities.
She can run faster than light. Stackler City is one of the biggest cities in the world and she can run the city in a blink. When no one can see you, it is easy to to find a way out of a crowd. Running fast is an advantage for her. No one can catch her because she runs faster than light.
If she falls she used her gymnastic skills to make it look like it was suppose to happen. She gets in trouble by the boys in blue because she likes to swing on street lamps. When they realize she is Whrill Wind they let her go.
Her favorite move is to knockout her enemies with a double hip circle with a twist. In her free time all she does is gymnastics.
When she is bored she'll hide on the rooftops of tall and gloomy buildings and watch the city or funny dig videos. She has always wanted a dog, but has never been able to get one because of her mom. So, to get her mind off of it, she will play city wide hide and seek. City wide hide and seek is best when her enemies chase her.
There has been a crime wave in Stackler City for years and finally someone is going to end it. Whrill Wind wins all her battles except the one with her mom. If you see someone zipping by, that is Whrill Wind. According to Stackler City News, Whrill Wind is the newest and coolest superhero!
Hi Livi this is Daniela I like how you put her phone in your poster to show she likes dog videos . I also liked how you started with what her superpowers are so people don't get confused. But I think you could add the fight with her mom because that would be entertaining.
DeleteI like how you said what she likes to do in her free time. I also like how you described the buildings she like to sit on and watch the city. I think you could say who the boys in blue are so people don't think it her enemies. But other than that GREAT JOB!!!
DeleteGreat job!!!!!! I like how said boys in blue instead of police. I also like how your title is a question. Maybe next time you can talk more about city wide hide and seek. -Delani
DeleteHi livie this is Bryndal I think you did an amazing job on your story. Maybe next time you could about more about the boys in blue but besides that you did a very good job.
DeleteThanks for the nice comments. If we have to write part two I will add more about the boys in blue. I will add in the fights with her mom. And I will describe city wide hide more ~Livie
DeletePsychic Girl
ReplyDeleteBY: Shaylee s
Have you ever wondered how a superhero with mind power would be like? Well you don't have to worry about it anymore because Psychic Girl is in town. According to Psychic Girl's records she can fly to spy on bad guys, read minds to see what they know, and telekinesis to stop the bad guys from getting away. She wears a blue shirt with blue pants and has long blue hair in pigtails. She also wears a gold mask.
Psychic Girls real name is Sarah Sundune. She goes to Ridgewood High school. She always needs to hide her identity from everyone. Even her best friends.
According to wallaby city news, a new superhero is in town! Her name is Psychic Girl. She just stopped 10 bad guys from stealing money from our local bank. Thank you so much Psychic girl.
According too wallaby city news. It is a beautiful day today. Psychic Girl has just saved 20 people from a burning building. Psychic Girl has not missed one recuse this month. That is amazing.
According to wallaby city news. Sadly Psychic Girl isn't saving wallaby city lately. She left this catch phrase for us though. " I got my mind on you", Said by Psychic Girl. She is out fighting a new super villain. TO BE CONTINUED........
I really like your intro paragraph!!!
DeleteHowever maybe instead of ending it with three new story's maybe you might want to end it with talking about her three powers.
Hi Shaylee. I like how you put To be Continued. I also like how you described how Physic Girl just in case we forgot the poster. I like how you put According to. I think in paragraph 4 forgot to merge the sentences. ReesDaKing is out!
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Hi Shaylee this is Daniela I like how you talked about a wide variety of things because you hit every topic . I also like the name of your city: Wallaby news it sounds really cool and professional . If I were you I would add a little bit more about why she isn't saving Wallaby city anymore just so people are left on a cliffhanger but not confused . It will help people better understand what they are gonna read next.
DeleteSuper Baby
ReplyDeleteBy: Daniela D.
Have you ever seen a baby talk? Well, this baby can fly. Binky Boy lives a real life and has an indestructible onesie, a laser binky and can fly. He has a very supportive family and lives a very busy extraordinary life. His superpowers are always used to do good things and help people.
Binky Boy’s real name is Larry Roberts. He lives in Angel City, but he saves people all over the world. Larry lives a fairly normal life, but nobody knows he is a super baby except his parents. It is an amazing responsibility to be a superhero, he wants to live a normal life. Even though he is just a baby, he speaks like an adult, which is another superpower of his.
His binky and onesie are great tools for a super baby, but since he is still a baby he has a real binky too. Sometimes he gets the two mixed up, once during a fight he realized the laser binky is just a binky. He also has a regular onesie he loves to wear when he is napping. Binky Boy uses his utilities a lot because they are very useful.
Binky Boy has had his superpowers since he was born. He received his flying ability in space because he was hit by gamma rays. They were in space when he was born because his mom is an astronaut. When he turned three his parents figured out he had superpowers. Which is when he started developing and using his powers.
Binky Boy has a binky that is a laser, can fly and has an indestructible onesie but he also lives a normal life. His parents know he has superpowers so they help him out. He has gone through a lot, but in all, he has lived a pretty great life. Wonder if he will continue his undercover life as an adult?
Hi Daniela. I liked how you made your poster 3-Dimensional, it made it feel real. It would be interesting if you added more to how "Binky Boy" Got his powers. For example, you could put why his mom was in space. I like that he has a laser binky. Rees is Out
DeleteThanks Rees I liked my 3D idea also. It would be more interesting if I added more about how he got his powers.
DeleteI am a Superhero!
ReplyDeleteRed Bain is a super hero that has three powers. One of them is bow and arrow. The other one is Alt F4. The Last one is turbo fly. This story will be about his super powers.
The first power he mainly uses his bow and arrow. For an example, they’re lots of villains in Bayville and he stops them. He goes up high and takes them out. But the arrow puts the villains to sleep. Then he takes the villains to jail.
The second power is Alt F4. He telepathically uses it when the villains are asleep. Then it sends the villains straight to jail. It only works when the villains are asleep.
His last power is turbo fly. He uses it when he is going around the city. It’s pretty useful for him. The reason why is he doesn’t have to drive. Plus he can fly faster than a car.
Now let’s wrap it up. Red Bain is not a bad super hero after all. His real name is Roy Harper. He was bullied in school but he went past that. Back to the super hero part, he saves the city, by protecting the citizens from the villains. But sometimes the villains get away. But the villains don’t hurt the citizens.
Hi, this is Jenna. I like how you stated all his powers an abilities but maybe next time you could put more paragraphs and put it in paragraph form. I also noticed that the last two sentences could be put into one like "But sometimes the villains get away, but they never hurt the citizens.
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Aspn Air is a superhero who can control the wealther, land, and ocean. Aspn protects Metric City. She has been protecting the city for a long time. Everyone there loves her.
ReplyDeleteAspn can control the wealther by makeing it snow, rain, hail, and useing the sun. She makes it snow and hail to freez villians. Aspn uses the sun to burn villains. She makes it rain to get villains wet.
Aspn can control the land by making plants grow faster, lifting up the ground, and controlling weeds and vines. She makes plants grow faster to help farmers. She uses vines and weeds to capture villains.
Along with all of these powers Aspn can control the ocean. She can make water rise, and creat Tsunamis. She can also make waves. She lifts up water to help her find things that might be on the ocean. Aspn creates tsunamis to stop villians, and she makes waves to stop villians.
All of these powers are what make Aspn who she is. She uses all of these powers on a weekly basest. All for different reasons.
Hi Izzy this is Livie. I like how you explained how she used each element. I also like how I could see a picture when I read your story. Maybe next time you could add her human name.
DeleteHay izzy it's kk, I liked the shapes you used on your poster. I also liked how detaled your story was, I really think you should say more about her back round.
DeleteNightowl
ReplyDeleteNightowl can turn into an owl, has night vision, and can make nerf bullets explode.
Nightowl turns into an owl when he is hurt. He also does it when he wins a battle against a criminal. He flies them to a prison when he wins a battle. He turns into an owl when in a fight to get the high ground advantage.
Nightowl uses his night vision to see through walls. He uses it to find villains as well. Villains are scanned red instead of blue.He uses night vision to see at night and find his way out of places.
Nightowls arsenal is just Nerf guns. Arranging from melee to rocket launchers even though they are Nerf guns. He can make normal Nerf bullets explode on command. He also uses trick bullets which are dud's for explosives.
That is all the super powers that Nightowl has. He may be human but he has a ragging demon inside of him. His parents being taken when he was 3. He has trained for 12 years to find them. That is why he became a superhero.
Hi Vanoss Gamer this is Livie. I liked how you stated all his powers in the beginning. I also liked how he uses nerf bullets to fight his enemies. Maybe next time you could add his human name.
DeleteHi Steven this is Israel. In your story you could have made your title a bit better but other than that your story was pretty amazing.
DeleteSuper Storm
ReplyDeleteby: Delani D.
Did you see that? Super Storm saved us again. She stopped a huge gas leak in the middle of town square. The entire population of Polygon City is cheering. Super Storm became a super hero when she was ten years old when she was struck by lightening in a radio-active storm. She has three super powers. She can create tornados, make thunderstorms and best of all she has super speed. She only uses her powers for good and to defeat evil.
According to Polygon City Times News, Super Storm can make a tornado out of thin air. She moves the tornados with her mind and directly targets villains and emergencies to fix the problem. The tornados are always different colors depending on the situation. When she is targeting super villains the tornados are blue, which is the color of justice. The tornados are also extremely effective in emergencies. She uses them to move people and objects safely out of harm’s way.
Super Storm can create thunderstorms with a single flick of her hand. The sound of thunder alerts the town that she is on her way and scares the villains. The clouds surround the bad guys and form an electric lightening fence that traps them so they cannot escape. Super Storm can strike anything with her powerful lightening bolts. She has stopped many villains from escaping by using her lightening bolts to scare and trap them.
According to the book “Polygon City Super Heros”, her nickname is Blue Lightening. They call her this because of her signature lightening bolts and her super sonic speed. She can run faster than the speed of light and you can only see the blue blur as she runs by you. This power helps her get to crime scenes fast. It also helps her dodge attacks from her enemies.
Super Storm is the best super hero in all of Polygon City. She always prevails. Her super powers of thunderstorms, tornados and super speed are incredible. She is always watching and never fails to come to the rescue of the Polygon City citizens. They all sleep safe because they know, whatever may come, Super Storm will be there!!
Hi Denali i love how you did your superhero on thunderstorm, tornado's and super speed. And you spelled everything correctly.
DeleteI think you could add a little bit of more detail to. You could also say how did she get her powers.
Hey Lani this is Jenna, I love the name super storm. I think your story would be a little more interesting if you put in a catch phrase.
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By: Michael E.
Have you ever heard of Speed Devil (Rollan Ford)? He is one with the Speed Force. He also has max human abilities. Speed Devil is one of the best Ninjas in the world because, he had the best trainer.
When Rollan was 16 he was swimming late at night and was struck by lightning. When he woke up the next morning he was walking to school. Rollan thought he was going to be late so he started to run. He ran faster than humanly possible. He couldn’t tell anyone. Not even Steven Pitcher Rollans best friend
Rollan was always tall, strong, and fast because he was an acrobat. He was the best at Metrica City’s Circus. The owner William Grayson took Rollan in when his parents died, when he was nine.
After Speed Devil gained his powers at age 16 he was taught by Ninja warrior Shang-Chi. Shang shared all of his skills with Rollan. He became Shang’s sidekick as Speedy. At age 18 he quit adopting the name Speed Devil.
Speed Devil fights crime along with his sidekick Fireflood (Richard Peterson). Speed Devil uses his speed, acrobatic abilities and Ninja skills to fight the greatest villain in his path Absolute Zero.
Hey mikey this Bryndal I really liked your story it was very informative about your super hero.
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