In Chapter 11 of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, Huck Finn walked into Injun Joe's motel room and found Injun Joe sleeping on the floor. Your writing assignment this week is to write 3 to 4 paragraphs around what would have happened if Injun Joe had woken up and found Tom and Huck in his room ....???
5th grade style - final copy/written in your Writing Portfolio - we will share these on Thursday -
September 29th -
Think about these ideas and items you want to include in your paper;
Characters in your story (must include at least Tom, Huck, and Injun Joe)
Setting (when/where the story takes place)
A description of how the boys get into Injun Joe's room -
What wakes Injun Joe up? Injun Joe's reaction to seeing the boys in his motel room......
Title - byline - first name, last initial -
Dog or Die
ReplyDeleteBy: Kassia S.
One afternoon Tom and Huck were walking. They had a idea to go see Injun Joe. But as they were walking they met a man that said. "I'll give you money for a big dog". But Tom said no. So the man said that if they didn't get a big dog. They would have to play with it to live. Or they will Die.
Now Tom and Huck are walking to Joe's and remember he has a big dog. So they go to the motel Joe's at and try to open the door but it is shut. So they look under the rug and a key was there. So they go in and Joe's on the ground. " He drank to much last night". Said Huck because of his dad told him. So they take the dog and start pushing and the dog barks for help. Also that makes Joe wake up o he is screaming his heart out.
After Joe wakes up Tom and Huck start backing away and say no words. " I can't belive your in my your in my room". Yelled Joe. " Well we can explain". Said Huck. Then Tom said really fast. " We needed to play with your dog or we'll die". After hearing that Joe said." Well you could have told me that before. Of course you can play with her she's really nice". So Tom and Huck lived after all. The End
I LIKED TOM BECAUSE HE WAS SMART AND FUNNY. HE MADE HIS OWN PIRATE GANG AND HE WAS THE LEADER OF IT.
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I LIKED TOM BECAUSE HE WAS SMART AND FUNNY. HE WAS ALSO THE LEADER OF A PIRATE GANG.
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I LIKED TOM BECAUSE HE WAS SMART, NICE, AND FUNNY. HE WAS ALSO THE LEADER OF THE PIRATE GANG
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One day, Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry broke into Injun Joe’s motel room. When they got in they saw Injun Joe sleeping on the floor. They remembered he had lots of dogs.
They started entertaining all the dogs and scratching their bellies. They were playing fetch with them and having fun. There were six dog and their names were Ralf, Zane, Odie, Susie, Pudding, and Roxie.
All the dogs gathered around and started licking the boys. The boys just blasted out laughing because it tickled. The Injun Joe woke up. He said “Ok, then also thank you for entertaining them while I was taking a nap”. The boys said, “you are welcome”. Then the boys took the dogs on a walk and Injun Joe was happy.
UH OH
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What if Tom and Huckleberry freak out when they see Injured Joe. Tom and Huckleberry went to the motel and gone to the wrong room. The lights were off so Tom and Huckleberry couldn't see anything. Tom tripped on something. Huckleberry turned on the lights.
Tom stood up and was trying to figure out what Huckleberry was staring at. Tom looked behind him and down very slowly and their was a...body! Oh my gosh their is a dead body in our room. Huckleberry looked at the room number and it was not their room. "Tom this is not our room", said Huckleberry.
" Wait I think that is Injured Joe", said Tom. "Nonsense", said Huckleberry. Tom checked his Injured Joe's pulse. Injured Joe's pulse was still going. Tom said to Huckleberry " get the phone". "Why", said Huckleberry. "To order pizza of course", said Tom. Huckleberry gave tom the Phone and Tom ordered pizza.
The Break In
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Tom and Huck were staying at a motel room when they went into they went into the wrong room. The room was for Injun Joe, but they didn't know that. The boys got into the bed the same way they would any other day. The other bed had nothing on it which was a surprise because that is where they put there suitcases. As Huck was getting into bed he tripped on something. The thing he tripped on was a human, it was Injun Joe!
Injun Joe woke up and started screaming so loudly China could hear it. He got up and then the boys started screaming loudly. The boys got up and started running out of the motel. Then Injun Joe called the police on Tom and Huck. Injun Joe was getting angry, because they never picked up the phone.
When they finally picked up the phone the boys were in another town. The town was called "The Escape Town." Then Tom said "Are you sure this isn't jail?" Huck didn't respond to Tom's question. Meanwhile back at the motel the officer finally showed up. The officer said "What happened here sir?". Injun Joe said " Two boys came into my room and woke me up." Then the officer said " Oh those two they are in jail." Injun Joe did not respond. THE END!
I like Tom
ReplyDeleteWho is this? By: Steven H.
ReplyDeleteWhat if Tom and Huckleberry walked into the wrong hotel and walked into the wrong hotel room and the lights were on. Tom and Huckleberry couldn't see from how bright the light was. So they turned off the lights.
Then Tom jumped on the bed right next to Injun Joe. But Injun Joe didn't wake up. So Tom got out of the bed and told Huckleberry that they were in the wrong room. So Huckleberry checked to see what room number was and it was the right room.
Then Tom went out side to see what hotel it was he saw the hotel across the street so he thought he walked across the street to look at which hotel they were at. So he went back to the hotel room.
When Tom got back Injun Joe was waking up so Huckleberry and Tom ran away then they went across the street and called 911 that someone was trying to kill them but instead called the pizza man then called the police.
HUCK RUN!
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Tom and Huck checked into a hotel, their room number was 21. They accidently walk into Injun Joe's room which was number 22. It was dark so they did not see Joe, Huck jumped into the bed joe was in. Injun Joe started to scream. "Huck run!" Tom yelled.
Tom and Huck ran and ran. Injun Joe followed them for about a mile. "Did we lose him" Huck asked. "Yes finally." It was silent just the sound of panting was heard. They hid in a shed, it was in someone's property but they did not know that. The sun came up, and the sound of cows mooing and roosters crowing woke the boys up."Where are we" Tom asked. "Be quiet!" Huck snapped back. "Hear that, footsteps!" Tom and Huck yelled. "Who said that?" The farmer said. The boys dashed away.
The farmer grabbed Tom, Huck ran off thinking Tom was behind him. " Don't make soup out of me please!" Tom yelled. "I'm going to make soup out of you if you don't quiet down." The farmer said. Turned out the farmer was nice. Tom snuck away at night anyway and ran home. Huck never found Tom or life outside of jail...
Adventures of Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn
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One night Tom and Huck were chasing a dog and the dog went into a guy, named Injun Joe’s, house. Tom and Huck were so surprised to see Injun Joe sleeping. They snuck in and were looking in all his cool stuff. They heard someone coming into the room. They ran into Injun Joe’s closet.
Tom and Huck peaked out of the closet and saw that a person came in. The person and Injun Joe were talking forever. Then, finally the person gave Injun Joe a bag of money. When the person left he put the money under his bed. Injun Joe fell back asleep. Next, Tom and Huck came out and instantly Huck ran to the money. He grabbed the bag and was about to walk away, but Tom snatched the money bag and put it back under the bed.
They went to explore his room again and Tom saw a gold coin and he put it in his pocket. Huck saw Tom put the coin in his pocket. Huck yelled, “Tom put the coin back.” Injun Joe started to wake up. He yawned and stretched, then opened his eyes.
He screamed and said,“ What are you boys doing in here!?!” Everybody just stared at each other. Tom was thinking of what to say and Huck was thinking of an escape plan. Huck jumped out of the window. Tom was right behind him. They ran far, far away really fast. THE END.
The break in.
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What if Tom and Huck were trying to get in Injun Joe's house? Injun Joe's house is a brick house.
He has potted plants on his porch. He has two floors in his house. Tom and Huck hit Injun Joe's mailbox.
They looked in the potted plant for spare keys.They looked in oak tree. They looked everywhere but they didn't find the keys.
Tom and Huck found an open window. Tom climbed in the window and unlocked the front door.
When they entered all they could hear was quiet. Injun Joe and his white pomeranian were sleeping.
Tom and Huck were looking in Injun Joe's house.Huck dropped a blue and purple lamp.
Injun Joe's dog started barking. Injun woke up startle and scared.He got his baseball bat but Tom and Huck ran out of the house.
Dave the pizza man
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One day Tom and Huck were running thought a forest and ran by a motel. So they ran to the motel and Injun Joe was in it and Tom and Huck new what to do.
Once they got a plan they woke up Injun Joe and had a pizza party. First they had to call a pizza man. When they called they called Dave the pizza man. So when Dave brut the pizza and they had a party.
After the party was done Injun Joe went back to sleep and at the end it was jest a dream. But Tom and Huck were still there and Injun Joe real did wake up and Tom and Huck were in trouble
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, Huck Finn and Injun Joe
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One morning as Tom was sleeping, he suddenly heard a loud bang. Huck had thrown a rock at his window. Tom rushed down the stairs past Aunt Polly and Sid. Huck said, "I am going to spy on Injun Joe. Do you want to come"? Tom replied, "sure" and grabbed his coat. It was still cold outside because it was dark.
They found Injun Joe at a motel. The door at the motel opened with ease and the boys snuck in and went down the hall to Injun Joe's room. The door to his room was locked. Huck took a pin out of his pocket and picked the lock. Tom was very impressed with Huck's lock picking skills. When the boys creeped into the room, Tom accidentally knocked over a lamp. The sound woke up Injun Joe and he saw the boys standing there.
Injun Joe was frightened at first, but his fear quickly turned into anger. The boys were frozen with fear. Injun Joe yelled at them, "who are you and what are you doing in my room?" The boys did not answer because they were afraid that he would hurt them. Injun Joe did something even worse. He grabbed them by their ears and made them tell him where they lived. He then dragged them all the way home to Aunt Polly and told her what they were up to. Aunt Polly whipped them with a belt and sent them to bed with no dinner.
SLAVE OR NO
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" I think you can have it all. You just have to work hard because great things don't come easily." -Katy Perry
One day Tom and Huck were walking down the street. Then they see a fortune teller and pay her five dollars to see her. She tells them they have to meet a famous person in twenty four hours or, they will become slaves for the rest of there lives.
They got out of there seats and rushed over to the Joe,s Jhonny Joe,s motel where Injun Joe lived. It was nap time so they had to tip toed by everyones room till the reached his room. They slowly opened the door but they didn't know the door was very squeaky.
Joe woke up and saw them and said, "what are you doing in my room." Tom said, "we need to get a famous person in twenty four hours or, we will become slave for ever." Joe asked, " ok, where do you need me to go"?
Tom and Huck took him to the fortune teller and she said, " well done boys , you want be slave after all." " Now can I go back to nap please"? Asked Joe. " Yes ," said Tom and Huck at the same time.
THE END
Before and After
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First, Tom was watching the 1800 BC news and it said, "Joe had been arrested for stealing sticks and stones". So Tom shut the blue rock TV off and went on an adventure. He played find the stick so Tom closed his eyes and threw the stick but he could not find it. Then, Tom went to his cave and took a nap.
When Tom woke up he watched the news and it said, "It was 2016"! Then Tom said, "I took almost a 4,000 year nap". So he went outside and saw Joe and said, "I thought you were in jail". And Joe said "Why"? After that Tom said "This morning you were in jail". Joe was confused.
Later, Tom went to Aunt Polly and she was super nice. Everyone was on hoverboards and listening to something called music. So Tom went to a scientists and he said, "Something must have made you travel 4,000 years and into this parallel universe". The scientist said, "Did you touch sticks and a TV"? Tom said, "Yes". The scientist replied, "I know how to get you back to your world". All you have to do is touch the TV and stick in the opposite order. Tom was back in 1800 BC and said, "Everything is now right with the world".
What A Night By:Jillian K.
ReplyDeleteTom,Huck,Becky had forgot there stuff at Injun Joe's the night before because they were kicked out of Injun Joe's because of a noise complaint. They forgot there hats, shoes, backpacks, and apples. Becky was supper sick from eating candy and staying up to late the night before. She did not want to go but Tom and Huck made her. So she got out of her pink bed and put on her green slippers and they where off.
The walk there was boring and lame. Huck and Tom had to switch off carrying Becky because she had Nickles Disease. Once they got there they sat down to get some water and rest. Becky, Huck, and Tom had fallen asleep at the lobby.
The children got to the room surprised. They saw that the Kay was in the door and it was open. They walked in to see Injun Joe sleeping. They woke up Injun Joe by slamming the door. Injun Joe threw them and there clothes out the door and went back to bed.
Muff Potter
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What if it was a day off of school. It was crowded that day. Muff snuck out at 2:00 in the morning . People say," Muff will be hung for what he had done." The Sheriff was chasing him.
Muff was holding a knife in his hand. Muff was caught by the arm. He couldn't help it. Tom and Huckberry was standing dumb "why didn't you leave?" someone said. " I...I couldn't help it." Muff moaned.
Tom was getting reading for the day. "Tom whats on your mind kid." said Aunt Polly. " Oh nothing." said Tom. " You been saying, " Its blood, its blood, that whats it is." Aunt Polly had the same dreams sometimes. Tom's schoolmates will never really stop holding the dead cat. Joe was right next to Muff and Tom and Huckleberry was stupidly. Tom and Huckleberry was thinking why Joe was acting weird . Tom and Huckleberry where in the wrong room and saw Injun Joe.
Injun Joe and the costs by Heba.H
ReplyDeleteOne night Injun Joe was what time your party and Tom ,Huck ,Beckey were invitedthey brought there coats because it was raining that night they accidentally left there coats without taking them they went to their houses to go to bed then they met up in the park with trash bags over there house then today went to Injun Joes tell room where the party took place. They got there Injun Joe was still Sleeping so they had to carefully get there coats but Injun Joe had two closet so they Split up into huck by himself and Tom and Becky So them huck finds Becky and Tom coats then Tom and Becky find huks coat then when they slammed the door it woke up Injun Joe .Injun Joes reaction ahhhhh somebody is in my room. And then they leave and Injun Joe is like wait wait don't leave you guys are from the party right yeah why are you asking (all 3 of them said) then Injun Joe said did you guys get your coats. I noticed I was going to give them but i got to tried as iwent to bed i hope you would come back yesterday but you did not come back so then I waited one more day then huck tom and Becky left with a smile on there faces
The Mistake By: Natalie G.
ReplyDeleteWhat if Huck Finn and Tom were freaked out when they saw Injun Joe lying on the floor. Tom and Huck WERE in his room. It was dark in Joe's room no one couldn't see. They turned on the light and saw Injun Joe. They WERE freaked out.
Tom and Huck looked the window and saw Joe and Potter running away from the cops. They saw Joe in the room first then looked out the window and saw Joe there. Injun Joe and Muff Potter stop and the cops caught them. Tom and Huck was watching the whole time.
Everyone outside and wanted to accuse Potter. He looked around the circle of people and said "Plese don't accuse me I couldn't help myself". He saw Joe and said "Please Joe pal don't accuse me please". Joe tried to help it made it harder than it was at least he did it.
Chapter 11 by: Alivia B
ReplyDeleteOne day Tom and Huck were walking through the forest. Then they saw Injun Joe walk into an old motel. Tom and Huck got scared but walked into the motel anyway. The floors were cracked and the windows were broken. Huck almost fell through the stairs.
Injun Joe walked into the kitchen and fell asleep on the floor with his face in a cake. When Tom and Huck walked into the kitchen and screamed because Injun Joe was on the floor. All the screams woke him up and he was angry at Tom and Huck. The boys ran into the storage room and it was filled with cake. In five flat seconds the cakes were gone.
When Injun Joe found them and said," You boys are never allowed in my motel ever again.". The boys said, " Only if you make us a ten layer cake.". Injun Joe said, "Ok, fine". The boys took the cake home and Injun Joe was never heard from again.
The Adventures Of Tom Swyer And Huck By Holden T.
ReplyDeleteTom And Huck were roaming around. They walked slowly by Injun Joe’s motel. When it was dusk Tom And Huck snuck out of their homes. The boys stopped by Injun Joe’s motel.
Tom And Huck got to Injun Joe’s motel they threw a small rock into the window so they could break into the motel and steal food and explore around. When the boys were exploring they found Injun Joe sleeping on the floor. Tom tried to sneak past him but then Huck dropped a glass cup. The explosion from the cup breaking woke up Injun Joe. Tom and Huck tried to run away, but Injun Joe trapped the boys.
After Injun Joe caught Tom and Huck , he made Huck clean up all of the broken glass. Injun Joe also told Toms aunt he snuck out of his home and broke into his motel with Huck. Then aunt polly wacked Tom in the back of the legs with a thin wooden stick and sent him to bed. After Tom was beaten with a thin wooden stick Huck came to Tom’s window and broke him out again. Tom and Huck ran miles away from home. They ended up in a small ghost town with fifty or sixty people and most of them were criminal’s. When Tom and Huck realized that half of the people were criminal’s they tried running back home, but they couldn’t get back because they were lost. They were never heard from again.
The Adventures Of Tom Sawyer And Huck By Holden T.
ReplyDeleteWhen it was dusk Tom and Huck snuck out of their homes. Tom and Huck were roaming around. They walked slowly by Injun Joe’s motel. The boys stopped by Injun Joe’s motel.
When Tom And Huck got to Injun Joe’s motel they threw a small rock into the window so they could break into the motel and steal food and explore around. When the boys were exploring they found Injun Joe sleeping on the floor. Tom tried to sneak past him but then Huck dropped a glass cup. The explosion from the cup breaking woke up Injun Joe. Tom and Huck tried to run away, but Injun Joe trapped the boys.
After Injun Joe caught Tom and Huck , he made Huck clean up all of the broken glass. Injun Joe also told Tom’s aunt he snuck out of his home and broke into his motel with Huck. Then Aunt Polly wacked Tom in the back of the legs with a thin wooden stick and sent him to bed. After Tom was beaten with a thin wooden stick Huck came to Tom’s window and broke him out again. Tom and Huck ran miles away from home. They ended up in a small ghost town with fifty or sixty people and most of them were criminals. When Tom and Huck realized that half of the people were criminals they tried running back home, but they couldn’t get back because they were lost. They were never heard from again.
I think if tom woke injet joe up it would be nonsecnce. He would be so closs to hitting tom, toms quick reation would hit him first.Then they would just run away.
ReplyDeleteI think this is posible for many resons. First tom has gotten into a fight before. Also Tom would not mean to hit injet joe it would be self defence.
So in concluesion i think injet joe would get hit by tom. The resons why are. First Tom has gotten into a lot of fights. Also it would be self defence.
Tom Sawyer
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Tom had to white wash the fence because he was in trouble. He met a few friends along the way. Then,one night Tom couldn't stop thinking about Becky. That night Tom got so bored just lying there he climbed out the window to go meet Huck.
Tom said to Huck "hey you want to go exploring?", so the boys went exploring. as they were exploring Huck was talking incessantly Tom then spotted a motel room. They saw that all the lights were on. They cracked the window and as they climbed in they saw Injun Joe sleeping in his red and purple racecar bedding. The crazy thing is, is that it's 6:30 at night!
All of a sudden Injun Joe woke up! "what are you boys doing!" Injun Joe said. "Um we wanted to see what was in here." said Tom. After that the boys found that all of them like to be mischievous. They had a lot in common! The boys Tom, Huck, and Injun Joe all became really good friends.
Tom sawyer by atticus
ReplyDeleteTom and Huck was following Injun Joe in to his motel. They tried to go through the door but it was locked. So they got graveling hooks and used them to clime up the window.
They saw Injun Joe sleeping they woke him by slapping Injun Joe woke up and started chasing them.Tom said run they ended up running to town then Injun Joe gasp because he was afraid to go to town. Then he ran the other way. Tom said wow that was a close one.
Injun Joe came back to town at. Night then he went to toms house when he was sleeping . Injun Joe said how do you like it being yelled at in the middle of a nap.Tom said it is not pleasant then they all laughed